Timed Writing #2: "Where the Heart is"
The prompt for this timed writing is, "How does the main character change throughout the story." My thesis is, "She meets new people and grows from a scared, pregnant seventeen year-old girl, to a strong, confident mother." I received a 2 on this timed writing which is a 46 out of 60. So i got a C+ on this. I think this was because it was my first timed writing. The strength in this essay that i had was that i had a very good layout for what i wanted to write and i think that really helped me. I think the thing i need to improve on is probably time management. The goals i have for my next timed writing is to maybe prepare a little bit better so that i have enough time to finish everything and make sure it is good.